Moon is
subtle
Oval ivory white
countenance
A sensuous glow
disturbs
Who sits in quiet
encourages
Observance
merriment
At least
pleasures
Tempts one
desires
To believe so
love
Innocent
lust
She is an Earthy Woman
©MRL 15-01-2014
CABRINI C. said
ReplyDeleteLove it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
DeleteThis has such a soul to it, I like the structure (and accompanying image) very much.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks Bella. The words and idea were tumbling around my head for a couple of days. Influence of the moon - no doubt.
DeleteI really like this...a lovely and very interesting structure.
ReplyDeleteGood to hear from you Patsy and thank you for your appreciation of words in structure.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't certain of how it would be greeted, as it is stepping outside of the box!
Lovely Mel, great pic.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ita
DeleteLove the pattern of your words, clever and beautiful too.
ReplyDeleteSuzie, Thank you vey much and I greatly appreciate your comments.
DeleteBreda Q said: Brilliant Mel !
ReplyDeleteThanks Breda.
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