Celebrating 72
Having now had a birthday and being undecided
about my age. Am I twenty-seven or seventy-two
because I only feel thirty-five inside ?
Site soothed eyes
How enticing looked
each side
a mountain
green of smooth silk
ripe and lush
Tempted my eyes
lustily to roam
enjoy savour
sweet freshness
beneath my tongue
to dance over
swirl sip swallow
deep inside
a joy of wonder !
How enticing looked
each side
a mountain
green of smooth silk
ripe and lush
Tempted my eyes
lustily to roam
enjoy savour
sweet freshness
beneath my tongue
to dance over
swirl sip swallow
deep inside
a joy of wonder !
© MRL 11.01.15
Your youthful mind will always be you.
ReplyDeleteI sincerely hope so Gwen :)
DeleteWhat a lovely poem Me. have a wonderful year.
ReplyDeleteMargaret x
Thank you Margaret.
DeleteHello , your poem is beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary
DeleteA wonderfully sensuous write, most enjoyable! Happy Birthday :) Stick to 35 :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rose I intend to :)
Delete:) ...I know how u feel ... Love, cat.
ReplyDeleteDo you really :) ?
DeleteWell thank you Cat.