Strong She Wind
A southern strong She wind sings through trees
her decibels of inflexion vary as air pressure surges
I am infatuated by her elastic energy that combs
plucks leaves from treetops to prance as confetti
Her rhythm dictates our wedding dance
restful now she stirs a slight breeze
soft as silk with a rustle of satin
to subtlety caress gentle tears of joy
Stillness within her centre
restfulness peace
stationary air bides
a sublime quietness
Now!
Her strength of passion orchestrates
movements designed to hungrily probe
blow, fan without reserve to salivate
an orgasmic crescendo of lust.
© MRL 23-10-2011
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I like the way the poem ebbs and flows and
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out at the end in the " orgasmic crescendo
of lust." One can feel the energetic wind
in the lines of poetry. Thanks for sharing this.
Beautiful and so visual, Mel!
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ReplyDeleteCARMEL D said :Some beautiful poems there Mel. Very eloquent indeed.
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i like it
ReplyDeleteHello there! Thanks for stopping by my corner of the web. ^-^
ReplyDeleteNo other form of the written word can evoke such raw emotions, as can poetry. I have a deep love for poems, and am terribly happy to have found yours. May your muses guide your fingers for many, many more years. ^-^
I am quite taken with your Odes to Chocolate at the moment. Especially the first poem. It made me laugh out loud. =D
Hoping you're having a wonderful week! ^-^
Ygraine said: On 'Strong She Wind'
ReplyDeleteI love the union of wind and wedding!
So wonderfully eloquent and evocative:)
Very Best Wishes,
Ygraine
I can see the drama within the trees as I take in each word....beautiful xXx
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