Friday, September 27, 2013

September's Sun

September's lowering sun shines

Through old green sculpted leaves

Cascading as diamonds bright

A mesmeric tattoo of light

Forms dappled patterns

A moving beauty that creeps

Beneath ancient trees


© MRL Sept 2013

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    1. I appreciate comments and your few words have uplifted me; Thank you Margaret.

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  2. That's really nice. Made me feel quite dreamy.

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    1. Thank you Valerie. I always find that the flickering sunlight has an almost hypnotic effect on me too!

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  3. Oh very nice. You've captured the fall vibe so well. :>)

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  4. So very visual and serene are your words. Thank you for sharing them.

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  5. Many thanks Van am glad you enjoyed the poem

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