Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Moon Is...



Moon is 
                                              subtle
Oval ivory white
                                                         countenance
A sensuous glow
                                                  disturbs
Who sits in quiet
                                                        encourages
Observance
                                                       merriment
At least
                                                                 pleasures         
Tempts one
                                                   desires
To believe so
                                                love 
Innocent  
                                               lust
       
                       She is an Earthy Woman


©MRL 15-01-2014

12 comments:

  1. CABRINI C. said
    Love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. This has such a soul to it, I like the structure (and accompanying image) very much.

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    1. Many thanks Bella. The words and idea were tumbling around my head for a couple of days. Influence of the moon - no doubt.

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  3. I really like this...a lovely and very interesting structure.

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  4. Good to hear from you Patsy and thank you for your appreciation of words in structure.
    I wasn't certain of how it would be greeted, as it is stepping outside of the box!

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  5. Love the pattern of your words, clever and beautiful too.

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    1. Suzie, Thank you vey much and I greatly appreciate your comments.

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