Saturday, January 10, 2015

CELEBRATING 72

Celebrating 72

Having now had a birthday and being undecided 
about my age. Am I twenty-seven or seventy-two 
because I only feel thirty-five inside ?



Site soothed eyes

How enticing looked
each side 
a mountain
green of smooth silk
ripe and lush
Tempted my eyes
lustily to roam
enjoy  savour
sweet freshness
beneath my tongue
to dance over 
swirl sip swallow 
deep inside 
a joy of wonder !

© MRL 11.01.15

10 comments:

  1. Your youthful mind will always be you.

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  2. What a lovely poem Me. have a wonderful year.
    Margaret x

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  3. Hello , your poem is beautiful :)

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  4. A wonderfully sensuous write, most enjoyable! Happy Birthday :) Stick to 35 :)

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  5. :) ...I know how u feel ... Love, cat.

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